I appreciate the new logo. This does look really nice. I think though I still like the logo I had ranked 1st when the contest ended yesterday. I'll consider the options and select in few days. I really appreciate your work on this. Thank you
#169 Hi. I have another entry, however only the 1st ranked designer can submit new designs at this point. You can move the designs around if you would like to see this one (it has a golf ball...: )
Really like this. Still feel like the golf ball on there somewhere would have ben nice. I know you removed it off the O but didn't want the O to get lost by the ball.
#169 Water feature in background. I will continue to work on this feature if it interests you. I have a appointment now but will check in later for feedback.
#133 I've reworked the lone cyprus, still keeping it simple but not quite as abstract. Also, reworked the ball, made it smaller and less divots near the date, (I know you're not sold on that element). I'll continue to explore ways to improve.
#131 Here's another option and i will continue to explore ideas. I don't feel comfortable using the same concept as the another design, (golf ball in the background). Once everything is in open phase copying other concepts not allowed. i have some other ideas that I will try.
I know that eliminates your golf ball and tee design (which I do like) but maybe it highlights the O instead of using the golf ball which may disguise it a bit. I'm just spit balling a bit.
Ok thank you. Let's try something like if you removed the green part and filled the background space with a white golf ball and still had the tree and hill top but then changed the way the 3 OGs and Jr part were written in there? Could do green letters to contrast on the white golf ball and blue cypress tree.
Thanks for your continued feedback. I can see the other designs but it is against LT rules for me to comment on another designers work. That being said, I'm definitely committed to working with you to get a perfect design. I'll continue to explore ways to improve, and of course I'm open to requests from you.
Thanks!
Janis
Getting a lot of positive feedback on both your logo and the one I have ranked 16th now. I've gotten some new submissions and was curious to your thoughts on how I've updated the rankings of the other logos. I like the one that is 2nd now too from a different designer but was enjoying the quick response from you over the weekend. Not sure what you're able to see now in this phase but if you have any thoughts on those other logos then I'd like to see. Appreciate your time and help with this.
I like this because it contrasts the tree nicely. I'm just thinking of an embroidery standpoint and putting it on a shirt. I'm sure the place could do all the other blue too but just wanted to see it on the shirt color.
Got it, I'll show you what the other blue would look like. You will not have quite as much contrast between the white letters of '3 OGs' but it still may be enough.
Like this but would want to make the S in OGs slightly smaller and maybe change the royal blue in the main background to the shirt color. Could keep the royal blue behind the 2021.
I like this one too. Might need to be careful with the shape of the tree in case it too closely resembles Pebble Beaches logo. I’m not sure how the copyright or trade mark of that kind of thing works.
Thank you so much for the submission! I like the setup but may tweak the way the colors are filled in. Will probably put this on a light blue shirt of some kind. Haven't picked the shirt yet until I finalize a logo next week. But I like the direction you have gone so far!
#7 Hi.
Here is my proposal for your logo project. This would be super easy to print or embroider on hats, etc. Thanks in advance for your consideration and any feedback you might have is appreciated!
Janis
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Here is my proposal for your logo project. This would be super easy to print or embroider on hats, etc. Thanks in advance for your consideration and any feedback you might have is appreciated!
Janis