she likes the smaller letters in cold brew. is there a way to make the bananas more pointy at the ends? just curious. i think i'd like them a wee bit slimmer and pointier at the end.
Heads up, this desing will most likely be sent to LC. LC is Logo Court an internal system to allow desingers to protect here work and how submisison are uplaoded in this case i towudl be edge to edge. The string is to the top edge. The intend is that now matter who the desing is printed it is intended ot be print from the edge.
if it does go to LC I will need to remove it. silly i know. I've uploaded several updates that are not from the top edge.
I'd wish to thank you for considering my work throughout this project and the feedback is on the money. Without good communication there is no progress.
I like the 3rd color but the a wee bit lighter maybe, there is a lot more to balance when a 3rd color is added meaning change one color the othera need to be adjusted. I'll work on this and agree about the start I have an idea.
on this design? reason I ask is the COLD BREW is not scaled correctly too small compared to the ALL NATURAL ENERGY text which is why I revised with the ribbon style, please advise
bottles even better! than cans and thank youj for the compliment. I'll need direction to update these or other idea you have.
I am hoping I will be the only one to submit a 3 as B, during the first phase (blind desiingers cannot see each others work nor read comments a good becuase our discussiona are confidential same as design direction.
I see you have been here once before how did you find the experience overall?
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Are there any new ideas or changes?
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Added a small detail to the banner to make it more part of the shape and thickend the outer ring
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if it does go to LC I will need to remove it. silly i know. I've uploaded several updates that are not from the top edge.
I'd wish to thank you for considering my work throughout this project and the feedback is on the money. Without good communication there is no progress.
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2. rotated teh 3 bananas so it is visually more balanced compared to previous versions
3. a wee bit more detal has been added to the center disk and the star points these minor addons are for conversion to B&W
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2. changed how the grunge effect is applied to each color rantehr than being all white
3. update the 3 bananas with a wee bit more detail.
4. Star shape changed.
overall the version looks good and readable. Lets not added text to the bananas and reserve that info for labeling etc.
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When it is time to do the product labeling the tagline should be added separately. something I can help with at a later date.
when I have the 3 color version done I'll upload with and without banana text.
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Do you think putting the words "all natural energy "in the bananas is too busy? That was my girlfriends question.
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I am hoping I will be the only one to submit a 3 as B, during the first phase (blind desiingers cannot see each others work nor read comments a good becuase our discussiona are confidential same as design direction.
I see you have been here once before how did you find the experience overall?
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Question, the product to be sold in cans correct?