Hi Saurit, your latest entries are really great but I did not identify any improvements.
I will send you additional feedback if I have new ideas.
Thank you !
#34 and #36 are really nice! Removing few clouds was a great idea, #34 text position, font and colors are perfect. Characters positionning is really good in this #34. The rowboat is better with this design, great job.
May I suggest two other variations ? 1. Set the rowboat at a different location on the drawing, with a character in it, if you can keep it consistent (like #37).
2. Decrease height of the hand rail.
Thank you !
Hi ! Many thanks for the latest designs, I really enjoy them.
Text is really good.
Added activites are nicely representated.
The rowboat is a bit "unclear", I did not recongized it immediately.
The tree could a bit happier, with some green leaves for instance.
I will send additional feedback tomorrow as we have a review planned in the morning.
I will you keep you inform.
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I will send you additional feedback if I have new ideas.
Thank you !
May I suggest two other variations ? 1. Set the rowboat at a different location on the drawing, with a character in it, if you can keep it consistent (like #37).
2. Decrease height of the hand rail.
Thank you !
Text is really good.
Added activites are nicely representated.
The rowboat is a bit "unclear", I did not recongized it immediately.
The tree could a bit happier, with some green leaves for instance.
I will send additional feedback tomorrow as we have a review planned in the morning.
I will you keep you inform.
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