You can't treat me like this, consider all the hard work I put into your logo... and now you focus on the design which totally ripped off from my style.!
Hi, thanks for considering this version. I think the approach of the overall style really fits your business. Simple and modern, yet energetic.
here's the update of the thinner lines, and tracking of the text is closer.
Ok, let's see how this works!
1. Can we change the character Spacing in the lettering?-too much space.
2. Lines of the icon the thinness of the lines by studio
My coach likes this one too! Thank you!! I am starting to see the vision!!
hi, thanks for working with me. I actually envision the 3 cut pieces as your 3 businesses. :)
I extend the length of the 45deg shape, hopefully, it doesn't look much like a spaceship lol . I also thicken the outlines for better visibility.
My coach thinks this one looks like a spaceship. Is there anyway you can see from the another designer? I don't want you to copy, but I can see it working for my businesses. I really want to work with you because you listen to me. I like it, because it is a star but not the traditional star and it looks like it has three lines (my three businesses), but they never would go smaller on the lines and kept the satin finish in and he put it in with 1 min to go. thanks
another way of having the icon stretch out. (multiply the amount of the shapes)
perhaps you can sketch your feedback and attach it to me for the better understanding.
Hi, do you mean something like this?
stretch it out as in making the icon the size from the edge of the 8 to the R? I keep the height of the icon as it is, only changes the width.
Can I see this icon, thinned out and only changing the width that is the size to the edge of the 8 and the R. Do not change the height. I am not sure I am saying it right, but I keep height and stretch it out.
These are all looking like flowers, I need another style that is why I am asking it to be stretched so it has a different shape all together. You keep giving me the the same shape just different styles of that same shape.
I definitely like the finer line, but I still want the icon on top, that is what I like!! I don't want it to look like a flower, I can't see that being used for my foodie dinners. I need a logo for all my 3 business!! thanks you
Hi lonistar,
this is the update of the symbol in the finer line, similar to the line in Studio. Please see my new submissions for the new shapes. I'll to work on more options :)
The 28 Looks so much better, Thank you! When I said maybe/maybe not-I was talking about the icon might work with the suggestion I gave you or it will not. I would like the lines to be just as thin as the lines by Studio and stretched to the sides(keep the height of the icon) and see if the shape can be changed. Thanks-I am really liking this concept!
Hi, thanks for your consideration.
Sorry, but can you explain more about the lines maybe/maybe not? Meanwhile, here's the version of the number 28 all aligned.
I love the balance of this one!! I think the icon looks too yoga. My coach thinks the icon might look ok if the lines Maybe/Maybe not? Can you find a font that the 28 matches in height? You are getting close!!! I think you are starting to see my brand. Thanks!!
I love this, but my business coach doesn't think it goes with my brand. she says it is too fussy. I am a hairdresser, travel advisor, and foodie-Luxury Lifestyle Brand. Maybe step out of MY Box and use your creativeness to do something unique. Thanks
Thanks for considering this design. The sparks present the interesting individuals from different industry all coming together forming a shape of a star. :)
Here's the update in flat color.
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1. Can we change the character Spacing in the lettering?-too much space.
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I extend the length of the 45deg shape, hopefully, it doesn't look much like a spaceship lol . I also thicken the outlines for better visibility.
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stretch it out as in making the icon the size from the edge of the 8 to the R? I keep the height of the icon as it is, only changes the width.
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Sorry, but can you explain more about the lines maybe/maybe not? Meanwhile, here's the version of the number 28 all aligned.
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Here's the update using only one branch.
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