Don't like the purpleish color.. should be more bright blue... if you have an e-mail address, I forgot and attachment I can send to you to help see what we're looking for...
per request - we cannot copy a photo exactly unless you tell us you have the rights to that photo/image - thus try to get the essence of the structures in a more general graphic way. I looked up the bridge and the state capital to determine how to depict them (I have seen both personally as we are less than 3 hours away). It might help to know what color shirt you are doing. feedback appreciated
bridge and bottom text look alot better.. the capital is still not correct.. see in the attachments how there is a dome on the top and not the squares like you have... Sacramento has a 14k gold top of their capital.. as much detail in the capital you can get.. the better please...should really be outlined in black and the capital should be white and gold like it is in real lfe
Sooo. close! Change the outline of the 25th to silver and thicken the outline a little on that.. Then for the capital colors.. everything that's gray, make white and the rest of the detail and outline in black.... Then the sacramento, ca at the bottom make black That should do it!
Those corrections were perfect.. Since we are screenprinting on t-shirts.. the ink will bleed just a little... Can you extend the banner a little and make the year and text inside a little more readle? Make banner outline a little thicker too please?
per your request - the only real gradients on this is the shadow of the 25 - it does add depth - but you could still print as spot colors on a shirt to get a brighter result ... happy to modify more if you want.