Thanks for the updates! The text becomes harder to read again in these versions, and only really pops when they're generally bigger in size.
The 'Addiction' text looks great; it's still just that Vigilant text that's trouble with those wings.
Maybe, create a background, for the entire thing (square/rectangle) and contrast the wings with the background? Might make the text easier to read? Not sure though... really trying to think....
This is probably the better one of the new fonts; mainly because it's easier to read the text. It could, potentially need some more work though, at becoming easier to read. You're certainly moving in a great direction now.
We like the direction you're going with a Mascot; however the "Dragon" isn't really our thing. We're more Angels and Devils. If you could come up with something for that as a Mascot; that might seal the deal!
Probably some more work on the Vigilant Addiction text as well. Vigilant doesn't need to be bigger than Addiction, or anything like that.
Normally we have "Vigilant" Grey, and the "Addiction" Red. (Good Vs. Evil)
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The 'Addiction' text looks great; it's still just that Vigilant text that's trouble with those wings.
Maybe, create a background, for the entire thing (square/rectangle) and contrast the wings with the background? Might make the text easier to read? Not sure though... really trying to think....
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Was curious if you could come up with anything like this previous one you did - http://3ef44ac2a814e81509fd-288404e13f895703cf2798bf6ae95228.r56.cf1.rackcdn.com/280652411826-350.png
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The spacing and thickness is good and I really like the "A" and "N" in Addiction and what you did with the sword. in this one.
"Vigilant" might need to be slightly bigger? Can't really put my thumb on it.
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The sword is excellent; but it's the rounded off font that probably throws everything off a bit.
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Best,
Nur
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The space between the L an A in Vigilant throws me off just a little; as I expect some of the background wing to be there I think.
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please check the update
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Probably some more work on the Vigilant Addiction text as well. Vigilant doesn't need to be bigger than Addiction, or anything like that.
Normally we have "Vigilant" Grey, and the "Addiction" Red. (Good Vs. Evil)