#9 - don't like the curly font of the 24 however needs a feminine font - something less curly; also, please make the clock arms (on the letter o) more pronounced #7 - same with curly font, like crooked-ness/angle; don't love the blue in the center of the o - something else perhaps?
#10 and #11 - Like the fonts for 24. #10 - Like the fun quality of the note. Wondering what #10 would look like if all the gold was turned into turquoise.
#10 - love the number on the 'pinned note'; would like to see a less gold yellow, perhaps softer yellow; turquoise instead of the dark blue for the other words. Can you justify 'are enough' to the far right so the 'h' lines up under the 's'. I know this contradicts earlier comments however, like the yellow, the navy is too harsh.
I just noticed your comments to me that were posted on the main contest page (when you comment to designers through their entries, we get an email notification. But when you post comments to the main contest page, we don't).
That being said, prior to my most recent submissions, I did not see your comment about trying other/feminine variations. I will be able to work on different color combinations this evening and look forward to trying other colors.
By the way, I looked at my most recent entries on a different monitor than the one I used while creating, and the colors don't look at all like they did when I created the entries :(