Hey! I like the entries you submitted, thank you for your help. Entry #12 with the use of gold does a good job of illustrating the upscale branding we're going for. I worry that the image with the glasses kind of has a funky look to it - we're targeting older women in their 50s so we would want something a bit more subtle. Along those lines, could we try more of a cursive/elegant font for the "24/24 Vision" text. Thanks for your help!
Hey, I think the logo does a good job translating the higher end brand image. However the logo seems to be a to complex and incorporates a little bit too much of the sun. This also gives the logo a "flashy" look that will force people away from associating with it. If you can simplify the look but keeping the same theme it would be great!