James 1:27 FoundationLogo Design Contest

Dear CH

Thanks to the rank selection
What should I do to improve the existing ratings
Please feedback comments

regards
acongkecil

I like logo #28! Great work. Sorry that I did not provide feedback over the last couple of days. I was hosting several friends in from out of town. Your logo went from too "cartoon-y" to more legitimate. Actually, I just noticed that the doves are also hands. Wow. Well done. I am really liking this. I like the colors as well! Thank you. I am not sure if I can give you any feedback, because it looks great. I will have some board members take a look and get their opinions as well. Thanks for participating.

Brent

Can we look into a logo without have the "eternal provision" tag line? We won't be able to read the tagline if the logo is reproduced in a small size. Thanks.

On both #28 and #29, can we make the hands lighter and more dove-y? Let's see how that looks. Thanks.

And on the ones where we do have the tag line, let's remove the first word "establishing" and just go with "Eternal provision for children in need"

Got some feedback from our lead Board member. He likes having the James 1:27 banner at the top because you can make out the doves as hands better. He would like to see "James 1:27" in the Papyrus font like what I asked YSomzey to do in #30. He also would like to look into a different banner color story than burnt orange / gold, although let the record state that I think it looks fine. Don't forget to try a logo without the tag line and one with (removing "establishing" from it). Thank you.

Thank you for the input, I'll try to make as you requested, but the font Papyrus in the banner looks less obvious

Dear CH

Enter the design of # 37 it was obvious that the logo has encompassed all
Starting from the name of James 1: 27 of the foundation to the slogan or tagline
Visualization is also supportive of the contents of the word of God in James 1: 27 which in broad outline to help the widows and orphans in misery.

Regards
acongkecil

Acongkecil,

Thanks for your design #37. Can we bold the James 1:27 in Papyrus and can we lighten the shade of the hands? Thank you!!

Brent

The bold James 1:27 is great! Entry #38's hands are still not light enough. I think that if you made the hands as light as those in ysomnez's entry #34, you would get a lot of votes from our 7 board members.

Thanks,

Brent.

Thank you rank, and God bless
acongkecil

Dear CH

Syallom. . .
Why yesterday you told me if I could design a majority of votes, but now the deliberations during the current design so I dropped in rank # 2. when I make a vow or promise if I can be a winning design will be the money I gave to my in-laws who happened to be a widow.

So indirectly I have been doing good like James 1: 27 Foundantion, the representative in my country. Amen

God bless

Regards,
acongkecil & wife