I like the start, however, this is a little too non-traditional for golf and our audience. The logo and the color choices remind more of the Beatles "yellow submarine". I do like how the hands are more prominent in your logo, than that of the others.
Some suggestions:
- Can we try a different color pattern? - Can the club grip be a dark gray? - Can we center the logo above the text? - Can we add "James 1:27" to the words "Golf Marathon"
Are you getting excited for the World Cup? Thanks for the re-submital. I like how you angled the grip. That was a nice touch. How do we emhasize the contrast between the adult hand and the child's hand? Could we make he adult's hand more "worn"? Could we also put James 1:27 more prominent than the golf marathon part? Thank you!
I Mr brent Im extremely excited for the world cup. I hope we take the 5th victory. I will make the changes and i will submit very soon .... Kind regards, Francesco
Farfi, I like #31 a lot. I like the shield and I like the color change. The hands portion of your logo shows best the contrast between an adult hand and a child's hand. Can we put James 1:27 above "golf marathon"? Also, the golf club looks like a baseball bat to me. Can we make the grip black and then have a gray steel shaft at the end of it? That would be more authentic.
I hope USA beats England and has a decent showing coming out of our group.
The United States is a good team, but England has a great coach, Fabio Capello, really good .. we have the first game with Paraguay. I'm afraid of the South American teams. but we hope all is well .. I will soon changes for the logos. I'm glad you like my work. Greetings from Italy ' Francesco
Frencesco, one last bit of feedback from the overall chair of the foundation: he would like it to say "The James 1:27 Foundation" instead of just James 1:27. This is similar to how the Keith Brooking Foundation does their logo. Sorry for the hassle. Almost done.