1st Choice ServicesLogo Design Contest

Take out lines in top half.
Take out black thru the center words.
Make trusted for generations larger and easier to read.

Make the whole logo a little taller.
So we can not have the 1st jammed to much into choice services. Trusted for generations needs to be a little larger

Can you outline the gold in black. can you make the gold a real bright almost yellow gold. take stars out of logo. Make center words pop more. make the 1st a little smaller.

make it read a little clearer.

Ok thanks! I will move it to 1st ranking when you are ready!

Hi.. i forgot one thing. since your contest is in selection phase only rank 1 can submit revisions. For now just let others rank 1st to have them submit your request to them, i will let you know if i have done my revisions you request to me so then you will give me a chance to rerank and submit mine. I will now work on this.. thanks!!

Hi.. thanks for your feedback. I will do my best for this chance you give.. Many thanks again

Can you do some different things with this? Maybe change shape?