#10 The yellow in the logo text is not clear enough. The logo will mostly be used on white background, so the text needs to stick out more. The form of the icon is good, but the eye is not 'telling' the story.
#11 Like the colors (though the black is too dark), but the 'three-way' colors in the hand is not telling anything.
#12 A very complex icon that isn't clear in what it is. Again good colors, bot black text too dark.
#13 The 'three-way' hand is not good, but the shape is. Maybe if the finger clicked something recognizeable (like a play button) it could work. Again, the black is too dark.
#14 Colors not our style. Icon too detailed and not telling anything.