Dein Reisebüro begeistertLogo Design Contest

#1
Visartes hi, thanks for the very first design!
I am very pleased.
The individual letters may appear even lighter and everything is still a little more dynamic.
it may still express more radiant color detergents. Maybe Ariel/Dash...
THX! :-)

Hi, Thank you for feedback.
I'll upload revisions soon.

Kindly regards
Sebastian

# 1
Hi Sebastian,

pls write the Capital & lowercase letters like this: "Dein Reisebüro begseitert" THX! :-)

#2
my orthography ^^
"Dein Reisebüro begeistert"

#6
Hi Sebastian, the right way! Juhuuu...
maybe it´s possible to do ist more "explosive", more open, not that closed in this elypse.
i put a new attachment named "dash" on. do you see the star behind the letters... I like this... :-) THX very much!

Hi, Thank you again for great feedback and I'm sorry for delay in submitting new entries.
I will upload revisions very soon.

Best regards
Sebastian

do you still think on it:
#6
Hi Sebastian, the right way! Juhuuu...
maybe it´s possible to do ist more "explosive", more open, not that closed in this elypse.
i put a new attachment named "dash" on. do you see the star behind the letters... I like this... :-) THX very much!