#7 I think this is the color I'm going for, also possibly red white and blue. I would really like to see some swimmer silhouettes jumping off (or getting ready) to jump off blocks. I think it would be cool if the blocks were placement medals (1st, 2nd, and 3rd place).
Thanks Corvin..... another thing I noticed is we don't need that 2013 at the bottom because we already have it at the top.... and maybe put Saturday in front of April 27th - Saturday, April 27th - and possibly even add in the location - Sunnyvale, CA.
My customer also asked me to keep it kid friendly so maybe think of that as you're doing the blocks. Another idea, hopefully to make things easier for you, was to have ribbons coming off the backs of the medals (blocks) and wrapped around to give some color to the logo. Maybe weave the text in with the ribbons somehow if possible. That's why I mentioned red, white, and blue may be the other 3 colors if needed. Just some ideas that were given to me.
Haha. Good deal. We do 5 to 15 events each weekend and sometimes we'd like art a little bit better than we can do ourselves. If we get some good stuff out of this I'll be using this site quite a bit.
These entires are not what you were looking for (#8 and #9), just would like to know if they're "too much" for kid friendly logo? I'm looking for the style, meanwhile still working on the other one.
#9 Thanks Corvin. I like 9 better than 8 but I'm not real high on that overall look. I like the text style in 7 the best. Think "10 & Under Championships" should stand out. "2013" and "Pacific Swimming" can be a little smaller. Maybe make the blocks a little larger, put circular "placement medals" on them - 1st, 2nd, 3rd.... and have some sort of swimmer sillhouettes on top of the blocks - if possible. Maybe some water splatter as well would look good. Thanks for your hard work.
11 is my favorite so far. Can I see what it looks like with the words "10 & under championships" switched with pacific swimming? Also can we add the date and Sunnyvale to that one? I'm working now but I'll try and respond whenever I see the next
Corvin... getting better and better. I think we are heading i the right direction. A few things I would like to see....
1) "10 & UNDER CHAMPIONSHIPS" has to be the biggest text. If you could replace "Pacific" with "10 & Under" and "Swimming" with "Championships". Then put Pacific Swimming up top and move the date where 10 & under is right now. I think that would look right.
2) I would still like to see swimmers on blocks. This could be as simple as replacing the swimmers in the medals. It's something my customer asked for so something I have to show.
3) Maybe a little more color in the background. Maybe some sort of combination of 18 an 16 but be creative. I think more is better for the age group we will be selling to.
#26 and #27 I like a lot! Thanks so much for your hard work. I think from here forward just some minor changes before I show to my customer. Working with #27......
1) Any chance of getting rid of halftones and getting the logo down to 5 solid colors - red, navy blue, bright blue, white, and gold. We are making transfers with these and halftones are tough to print. Example... all the bright blue in the image should be the exact same color.
2)Can we make the "Pacific Swimming" just a tad bigger? Maybe make the ribbon a little bigger to make it possible or put it above the ribbon.
3) Can we put that navy blue outline around the ribbon like you had in example 21?
4) Can I see the text colors in a few variations?
Thanks so much. I'm really starting to like it and I think my customer will too.
Don't worry about the colors, I work in pre-press ;) I always send all files what the client needs for different products (T-shirt, flyers, promotional items, web, etc.).
IMPORTANT! This is not an offer or arrangement, I just answer to your question and informing you how I usually work. Still 3 days left from this contest :)
Will you print only in transfer or in screen print too? Would you like to see this logo without halftone?
Yes please without the halftones. It will be all transfers and those can be difficult with halftones. If I could see the blue outline around the ribbon too that would be nice. Just so the customer can see it that way.
Will be a pretty decent sized logo. Let's go with the halftones in medals - I have quite a bit of time to learn how to print it right. Can I still see the changes I requested in my 11:16 and 11:18 posts? Trying to get a couple I think my customer will like so I can send things there way. Thanks!
Awesome! Can't wait to see it. I just forwarded the this link to my customer so now I'm waiting on feedback. I'll let you know where we stand once they tell me. In the meantime, feel free to try anything. Never know which one may win.
#39 I like this idea too! I'm curious to see what my customer would think. Can I see it with something in the background - maybe that water and/or zig zags again ? And on both light and dark?
Hi Corvin... I'm still waiting on more feedback from my customers. The people from logotournament.com suggested I remove most of your files to help encourage other people to get in on the contest.... that's why I moved them to the right. Love your stuff though and really appreciate your hard work. I'll let you know when I get some feedback from my customers.
Thanks, will do these changes right now. Sorry for my last entries (#50 , #51), but I was ready to upload that concept, and I didn't want to wait another day with that.
Could you do me a favor and shoot me a quick email when you upload the changes? I'm going to be away from my desk for a bit but will see the email when it's uploaded. My email is okenyon@onsitesports.com