I like your design concepts....but they may be a little too "designy" if that makes sense. I like #58 and #68. The other 2 are too much. If you would like....i would love to see #68 in another color scheme
Here is my first color revision as you've requested. By using several different color schemes, I'm trying to present easy to understand and "catch" difference between the main word elements. Keep in mind that any colors of your personal choice could be used. Thanks