-Letters for "Comic Book Lounge" -Basic layout-you are on the right track -pants/shoes designs are fine
suggestions:
- Place the "I got Issues" bubble on the right of the character and make it without spikes. -Try different hat designs -try different shirt designs such as a Tshirt in different colors, jeans are fine,change shoe/boot color to tan or brown -It appears the character is holding up record albums instead of comic books. Give them more detail and also maybe 2/3 in each hand. -He should be holding the comics over his head yelling like a paperboy from the 1920's. -Make the charater more athletic looking (I'm a big guy)