$10 Luxury GiftsLogo Design Contest

My first entry, any feedback is welcome & appreciated, thanks!

(This comment references Entry #2)

First of all, good job. You read our notes. Can we make the Teal and White $10 tag larger. Very clever the way it's an attached Tag. Can we accomplish that without obscuring any of the $10 with the letter 'B' like in Entry #3?

This is going to be lit and roughly 20" letters, so roughly 15-20' of signage.

Is the word Boutique in italics going to be legible at a distance? Perhaps a few non italics versions?

Thanks for the feedback, I can make the Boutique letters a little bolder.
I work for a sign company & when we need to make illuminated letters out of
a thin or script font, we add an outline (sort of similar to entry #5)
I'll play around with this & see it I can come up with something.
I will also try some other fonts.
Thanks again,
Don

Entry's 4 & 5 are good, but the Teal ones feel classier.

Thanks Don.

Let's also try some without the Tagline...

Sorry, forgot to make the tag larger, here it is larger.

(This comment references Entry #13)

Hey Don, Good.
I like the tag coming off of the B.

With entry's #13 and 14:I think the font needs to be in between these two as one is too much cursive and one is too plain.

Let's add back in the tag line Luxury for Less.

Perhaps move the $10 higher 'and' separate it from the B? (what do you think?).

Sure thing, I'll try some other fonts as well.
Thanks

Good. Perhaps 50% of our customers are likely foreign tourists on Hollywood Blvd, so English may not be a first language, so cursive may be difficult to read...Please try it with a Tiffany's font or just a less ornate font.

Entry 17: Change tag line to teal for all of them please (good idea)

hi Don,
We're looking for a logo (for Bags, business cards, etc), but we're also simultaneously designing a marquee sign. The marquee sign needs to skew left as we have an obstruction, hence my insistence with the '$10 tag' to the left of the logo, throwing off the balance.

Please use something similar to the currently ranked #4 as cursive/script will not work for our tourist audience.

Try TEN' Luxury for Less

Don, let's try a different slant:

$10 (tag is 2/3's of sign)
Luxury Gifts

Good, hope you're having a nice day.
May we see a version that's more vertical with a larger $10 over smaller 'Luxury Gifts'?
Thanks,
Paul

I think we're getting somewhere. Can we square it off vertically and include the verbiage on the tag?

Imagine it as a 10' Marquee sign and the public is anywhere from 15-50 yards away trying to read it. The $10 needs to really pop!

Let's make the logo somewhat larger to allow 'Luxury Gifts' (in black and change to Tiffany font) to be on the same horizontal line.

Thanks.
good job. good night,
Paul

I was thinking that if we put the words 'Luxury Gifts' inside the number 0 (zero) it would make the number 10 pop even more. Do you think this can work?
Thanks.
Paul

In my opinion, I don't think this one works very well...

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