Hi Scott! Much better.
It is short on time, but could you do a "sparkle" effect instead of the stars (see the ring of the symbol entry 226). Take away stars. And if you could test some other font. And i think the way the logo is stretched, it looks odd. Could you give it another try. It nice with perspective, but something feels wrong when I look at the logo.
Really nice with "go", and the overall concept!
Thank you!
Ella