YES! Safe Choices for KidsLogo Design Contest

My submission for your review, I hope you consider ranking rather than Elimininating the points awarded even if we do not win are equally of value. Hopefully you see the potential

Scott
EastCoast Creative

(This comment references Entry #129)

text alignment updates

(This comment references Entry #132)

We have decided to drop the "Safe Choices for Kids" from the logo. Can you please make some updates with this information? Thanks.

Do you also have any ideas that eliminate the people figures?

thank you for the updates working on it now

Scott

first updates as requested

(This comment references Entry #138)

Let me see what I can come up with and thank you for taking the time to review and leave feed back have you viewed my LT portfolio?

(This comment references Entry #139)

new layout with action, I change the font for from Senators and Lourdes. Reason being is as it is there several round fonts in the logo that it is hard to read by changing the tagline to non round sands gives that added punch of readability.

we can adjust colours at any time

question do you need the word "from"

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Yes I do need the word "from".

I also need the "From Senator Libous and Lourdes" to stand out more. We also open to switching the order to: "From Lourdes and Senator Libous" if that helps. It needs to be a little bolder.

with out the word "from" this really helps to simplify the overall all dynamic of the layout...I am liking this on the best

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I can see that from Entry #144 as well. However, I still need that to be more prominent in the logo, perhaps change the color?

I've added the tag on the outside...and kept the "from" I am not liking this layout the dynamic of the design is lost and so is the meaning of embracing or encompassing all

(This comment references Entry #152)

Just so I can see it can you change the lines above the "e" in YES! to blue and then the ones below LEADS to orange... I'd like to see what it give us. I like it in the inside too.

I'll make the revision and i have one more layout change same design

update

question do you want "hospital" added?

(This comment references Entry #162)

In this particular design I would say no.

revised layout with tag change

(This comment references Entry #163)

stacked version

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if you need for me to swap out the Y and S in YES for the same typeface as Leads which is Dom Casual no problem...we can do this even after contest ends your thoughts?

Can you take Entry #148 - change the two line that come off the "E" in YES to Blue color. Then change the three lines under the "S" in LEADS to orange.

Entries #164 and 163 "From Senator Libous and Lourdes" is now very prominent, but it's a little too much.

3 updates

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idea

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Can you make the ! a star on #148?

Yes


but only 1st ranked designer can upload you would need me to be ranked first in order for me to upload the change