Why do you have "toy" and "box" in two different colors, and then Wood as the same color as the box? I think "toybox" should be all one color.
The design is too confusing to the viewer. It must be very obvious that it is WoodToyBox.com
You also may want to make the box wider. All of the toyboxes on the market are about 2 times wider as they are high. Look at our website: woodtoybox.com
Thanks for the redesign.... we are headed in the right direction.
Like it better now. The lid perspective is a bit off. Most of our handcrafted toybox lids overlap the toybox. So... if you would, please make the lid a bit wider so it looks like it would over lap the "box" itself". Look at this and you will see what I mean... http://www.woodtoybox.com/images/blanketchestfront289.jpg
I like that you have made the toybox wider. It is a bit too wide now. Make it not so long by about 10%.
One more thing... make the ".com" a bit bigger... it is difficult to see.
Bob, thanks for all the feedback. I'm hopeful this revision is gonna hit the mark. If all the proportions are right, I might try out a couple of different font styles on the box. I'd like to get the graphic right first. Do you want to see any adjustments to the bear or is it happy/cute enough. My goal is to have it motivate you and your staff. Don't hesitate to let me know. Thanks!
One more thing on the graphic... I like the bear being up a bit more over the front lip of the toybox (like he is trying to lift himself up and so his ears are up over the top of the lid. I like the bear up like 29 and not down in the box like 43) Maybe raise him just a bit more than 29.
bear adjustments: bigger eyes and smile. eyebrows. And while it might no be noticeable at it's current size, I have made the bear furry instead of flat.
We like the mouth of #47, however please change the eyes back to #44 eyes. Maybe keep the eyebrows though... you be the judge.
Also, I get the W T B letters for Wood Toy Box, however please change them back to A B C.
Also... I would like to see the very tips of the corners cut off (rounded). Our "mom" customers do not want rough corners on toyboxes (which none of our toyboxes have sharp corners). Try rounding to make a more "finished" look. I am NOT talking about a lot, just a few pixels.
We are almost there.
Tomorrow we will review your ideas regarding font and final graphics.