This could possibly work. I think the images need to be sharper and also the space it has to fit on the website is going to be a lot narrower in height (probably half the height).
I also think the 'Wealthystudent.co.uk' needs much more thought in terms of youth and fun. The brand name should be focused on more than the images.
I think perhaps that we need to change the actual images. Some of the main things they'll be able to get on the site are:
- Paper vouchers (2 for 1 cinema tickets) - Mobile vouchers - redeem vouchers on their mobile - Discounted tickets for nights out - Find a job - Work with a charity
I don't particularly want to promote drinking - a baseball hat is a bit too young and I'm not saying they are going to get a pile of cash when they visit the site.
So maybe a mobile with a voucher on it? Tickets for a night out? If a drink is too be used, then perhaps wine or champagne? And not sure how you want to portray the rest.
I am trying to graphically show the aspirations of the student about what and who they are. They are wealthy student.co.uk rather than what can they get from wealthystudent.co.uk.