let me think about
#44, not sure how I feel about the stitched border yet.
Overall,
#35 is my favorite. I love the bigger stitches. Looks sharp! And the unfinished look, was a good call to make the design work.
I have three comments:
1) can something be done with the color? If just feels too green. Like there's a lot of green here. I don't mind the color, it just feels over the top green.
2) Can you make the needle a shiny silver? two-tone Gray/Silver to give the appearance that it's shining? I'm not sure if this is doable, or even if it will look good, but thought a more realistic needle might give it more appeal.
3) Have you thought about other font options? I want the font to be legible, but after looking at some of the other designers, I was thinking some different text might be nice on this design as well.