Looking great thanks mate.
We try loose the actual circle see what ithat looks like
Then you have more space for detail.
I like the detail in the actual sky and on the water like entry 29.
But not the black back drop I know asked for that it looking at it makes it look like night time.
The beak n the black swan is a darker red and a big part of its character so try work that in.
Well done the were getting close