#26 Here are some suggestions Make the white area in smartphome element biger and add some monitoring effects into smartphome element. The wave element is too large. Slogan can is not strong enough. Other color is OK for slogan. Slogan is too close to upper element. Thanks.
#29 Here are some suggestions: put some elements in the smart phone screen to convey message regarding alerts, home, store or office. The elements should be simple and easy to identify. Make the slogan word bigger, bolder and little bit far from upper line. Thanks.