Ok, this is definitely the closest to what I was imagining at the start of this, as far as the animal shapes being in the breeze and not actually there. That said, I think this needs a lot of work. The runner appears to not be wearing shoes. I would like the cat more near the dog; not totally behind it but a bit slower. I would like the shape of the dog to be more like a golden retriever. For the font, can you make "on the" smaller and a different font? I would also like to see a bit more color. This is a great start though.
This is the closest to what I meant. Can you put the writing across the bottom? and change the font for "on the" please. Then turn the dog head around, as if it's following the runner. then put the cat behind or next to the dog; not as part of it's silhouette. thanks.
Getting better! Thanks for your continued work. I only see dog/cat patients so would like to change the animal silhouettes. also could you please re-read my idea from the contest page? So far no one has done that yet. You are getting closer with the way you have drawn the breeze of her back. If you move the writing to below and make "on the" smaller and different font, then there will be space to elaborate on the breeze and form the topline of a dog +/- cat from the breeze lines. Hope that make sense.
Hello, Thanks for your submission. Please see my comments in the general comments section regarding colors. I think this design is not unique enough and doesn't have many of the qualities I mentioned that I am looking for.
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