On #9 please space out the letters a little, they seem to close and is hard to read. Also see what it looks like with lower case after the first letter, ie. US College Recruiting.com.
Do you have anthing up your creative sleeve related to the example of the Oak Tree?
Also, thank you for entering this contest for me.
Thanks, Charles (via Bart's login) Business Partner
Hi ilkay I really liked the design style of # 9 but the text (US COLLEGE RECRUITING) at the bottom is a bit hard to read looks like the lettering needs to open up more. I feel the (Connecting Athletes & Colleges) on #9 is to small and a bit washed out on # 6. Also we need to get the .COM on #6.
But i realy like where you going with the design of bothe # 9 and 6. I agree with Charles, I like to see a 3D type of design like the Oak tree
Ilkay I like the style of #48 but we not to keen on the coloring of the sheild the (brown and Gold). make the map,stars,streak lines and text white. Please make (2) styles. 1) the background Blue/red ribbon and 1) background Red/blue ribbon. Look at the #1 logo colors see how they stand out.
Ilkay on #59 and # 60 remove the stripes make the backgrounds on both solid colors (blue & red). Make the map solid white, rotate mape by 10deg ccw and move it up. Put the .COM just belowe the map make ithe lettering bigger. Put the top flare more to the right off the lettering reduce the bottom flare so as to not wash out the stars.
Ilkay We were hoping to see on with a Blue background red ribbon white lettering also. leave the US COLLEGE RECRUITING in the ribbon on both sheilds like you did in 61. make 1)blue background and 1) red background. leave the stars at bottom get rid of the lines.
#96, make the text straight across versus the current prospective view. The red, white stripes on the bottom go vertical (up/down) versus horizonal (left/right). #63 & #78 make the .com bigger to stand out with the other words. Finally, make the banner bigger to have the slogan standout... You can make the slogan with Cap inital letters and lower case on the other letters. I.E. Connecting Athletes & Colleges. Try a silver outline on the ribbon or a double outline. We like how #78 is wider then #63. Below are other suggestions:
Ilkay Take #161 make the center ta tad darker blue, PLEASE take the dark highlight away from the bottom of the gold lettering. make the ribbon the same shade of blue. give me 4 equal size starts (white) arched across the bottom instead of the small to large
#160 give me 4 equal size starts (white) arched across the bottom instead of the small to large..
Hey, On #159 make the stars on the bottom the same size and arc with adove the stripes. Also emboss the US College Recruiting.com like #106, but do NOT change the colors, keep the same color as #159.
On #118, change the colors of US College Recruiting.com to be much brighter and remove the gradient to black. Make the bottom like #159, once you have updated #159, with the stars the same size.