Three Pigs FlyingLogo Design Contest

Hello, here is revision as directed, also simplified the color, is it work?

This looks very nice. My critiques would be that all the colors may make it a little too busy. Maybe less variety of colors - what do you think? Also, I don't know if the shopping cart on the mobile screen is necessary. I wonder how it would look if you brought middle piggy down to the middle of the phone to close that space and have him flying towards the top right - that way the shopping cart is not behind the purple piggy and it gives it some more symmetry. So the shopping cart and the mobile phone will form a sort of V shape. Make sense?

Here is with symetrical Pig

Here is with symetrical Pig

Very nice! Can you put the pig on the left in the same position as the one on the right. I think that will look nice and symmetrical. Thank you!

Here is the revision sir

Yes, thank You for the heads up. Will send revision soon

Oh ya that's great! Would it be possible to place the left and right pigs on the edges of each corner of the text - maybe as if they are holding up the text or something. And then center the middle pig coming out of the center of the mobile phone with the shopping cart angled to the top right as if it is flying towards the top right. Something like that - Make sense? I also like the clouds but the look a little incomplete if you know what I mean. Also not a huge fan of the blue background but I like where you're headed overall. Thank you!

With Shoper Pig coming out from the phone. And with cleaner look

edited

Sure, will develop the logo

Do you think the shopping cart in the top pig's hands might be better ascetically? Then you can also move the top pig to the left a bit to keep the center alignment after you add the cart. I would really like another color for the top pig as well. Maybe the top pig with the shopping cart is the one wearing the sunglasses. And make sure to make the sunglasses a different color than the actual pig. Thank you!

Here is with original pigs position

I like it better with pig on top. Its not clear what the thing you added on the top of the mobile phone is.

Sorry for the "S" here is i resubmit the design

Yes, it's great! Remember it's pigS not Pig.

Hello, thanks for the rank. And here is combination of my 2 previous entry. Is it work?