Love the negative space. I'm concerned that this is too modern, or that the KLF may be too difficult to make out. Can we make this SLIGHTLY more traditional (and I mean just a touch more obvious about the letters K, L, and F)?
I really love the negative space, and the first version does the best job of capturing that... I think the modifications change it too much to "block letters"...
K: Please add the downward/slanting left stroke on the top of the K that you put in 141 and 142. L: Could we see it with the horizontal top line removed (the "lid" of the L) and adding a slight upward stroke (vertical line) at the end of the L? My goal is to make it a bit more obvious that the L is an L, but not as obvious as the block letters of 141 and 142. F: Perfect, don't change a thing.
Final note: can you please make "The Kavinoky Law Firm" larger (but keep the right-hand justification)?
Hi, can you wait a while before making a decision as i feel your currently 1st ranked design is too close to my design. The rule says a design must be signifiantly different from another. I'm asking the opinion of other designers in the forum. Thanks for understanding.
I like how you've spread out "The Kavinoky Law Firm" in 316 and 317. I'd still like to see it a bit larger, if possible.
In 315/316 when you close off the top of the L but not the other letters, it creates the impression that the letters are of different sizes to me. Do you see that too?
Could we see a version where the words "The Kavinoky Law Firm" are to the right of the logo? Perhaps a vertical "pipe" to the right of the logo, and "The Kavinoky Law Firm" written there?