Dear Sueno Anwar, Thanks for submitting a very interesting logo to our contest. We think the icon you have designed is very eye catchy, we like the simplictity and the association to turning pages of a book. Generally we like the that you have highlighted 'Tempus' with a larger font but could you come up with a suggestion using an other font, perhaps a font that is more clearly a serif font? We like that you have used a sans serif font for 'Academy' but could you try with a darker colour making it more visible. And perhaps if you could make the make the vetical line separating the icon from the text a bit more visible as well. It's ok to use the same colour as for 'Academy'. Lastly, we are not sure if the logo is too blue. Perhaps it would be ok to try with diffrent colours in the icon. We are thinking about perhaps some sort of a warm colour but still combined with blue.
Hello Suseno, Thanks for posting the new versions! We like #196 with the green color. Would you perhaps make the blue color on the middle page a little bit lighter? With the green page at the bottom, the two blue colors look quite alike. And could you possibly try to write 'Academy' in the green color - as long as it's still visible? Could we try without the vertical line? The new font is very nice but it looks a little bit tall. Would it be possible to adjust the height without ruin the font. I don't no if it just cheats the eye - could it be because the font is rather compact?
Thanks Suseno, I prefer the angle you are using in #207. In #207 could you please try with a slightly darker green - or a green that is a little less yellow. I like the that green is warm so don't make big changes. I think it looks well with the new lighter blue color on the middle page. Regarding the font, could you please try to make a little more space between the letters?
Dear Suseno, Thanks for the new variations! We think the green in #212 & #213 is too cold. The first one in #196 is better but best something in between. We are thinking about a green color like in the font image on the website: http://billyargel.blogspot.com/2010/02/billy-argel-new-fonts-dafont.html - the green color of the star and on "Billy Argels Fonts" at the bottom of the image.
We like what you have done with the font in #213 but not sure whether 'Academy should be in green or blue. Perhaps try one with the new green and one with the light blue.