Xyan: Great Stuff and I like where you are going with this. All are great, but I like the #4 entry the best. A couple suggestions I'd like you to play with: On #4, the word Partners needs as much emphasis as Technology & Service, and I think Inc will need the same based on the following comments. I'd like to see the first letter of each word bolded, and raised a font size or two to make the initials stand out. This will address my "Big Challenge" problem outlined in the contest overview quite nicely. Please do the same with entry #5 which is also very much in the hunt. Lastly on #4, can you flip the cogs inwards so the gear teeth intertiwine. This may mess up the symetry which will need to be tweeked, but without the cogs fitting into one another, I fear the point of the image may be overlooked. You are on track, and I'd love to see some more ideas from you. Good job !!!
Xyan: Look closely at my current rankings. I really like what the leader has done with an eye like concept, and things top and bottom of it that are kind of like hands, and a symbol of the Partnership in Technology Service Partners. You are talented, and I'd like to see a submission from you that contains those same traits, but isn't a copy of the current leader. Regarding the words, Entry #21 is the closest to what I'm looking for BUT I would encourage you to make each of the starting letters a little larger, and to stretch the spacing between Partners Inc. so that they are the same combined width as the two words above. Take one more crack at it. You are definately in the hunt. Good job!
I think this is as far as the design can come closer with respect to Angelina also I prompted her in advance I might be using her eye concept as much as with my gears concept. Hope you would explain to her also for but nonetheless the designs would be far from the same. Thank you so much.