CARLA THANKS FOR YOUR ENTRIES, COULD YOU MAYBE PLAY AROUND WITH THE COLOURS? MAYBE A DARKER GREEN AND A PURPLE OR DONT USE GREEN AT ALL AND MAYBE A SHARPER COLOUR. EXPERIMENT A SMALL BIT WITH THE CLOURS AND MAKE THE WRITING A SMALL BIT BIGGER? I LIKE THE LOGO SO FAR
In the variation of colors i'm not going to work owith gradients (unless you want to) I suggest you not to pick something with gradients because it can cause you some troubles in printing for example t-shirts. It doesn't look really well.