Hi, thank you for the logo. I really like the font type of no #11. I think its smart that you put the 'a' in small letter and the font is clean but yet has friendliness and ethnic elements to it.I like how how the design starts from the dot above the 'i' esp in the brighter colors like #11 . I think the message of the 'sun' is very clear here. I would like to have more of Indonesian ethnic feel, as now the arrangement is tribal but not yet representative of Indonesian patterns. I also like the green that you use for #12 and #16 and if we incorporate that into the design it will be good, as it give the organic green feel which is used in organic food. Thank you.
I looked at your logos again, and I realized that no #16 has a nice concept. It has the pattern of the sun inside the leaf. When I saw it at first, it didnt occur to me that the green shade is a leaf, but more of an outline, and when i spent more time looking at it, I figured it out. I think that this design has a lot of potential. How about using the font type of no #11, making the green shape to be more obvious its a leaf, and having the inside sun strokes with the bright colors such as orange. Thanks a lot!
Thank you for #33. This is in the right directions. However I would like to propose some edits. Can we use the color orange for the circle and out of the circle to make the strokes thicker so its the same shape but less strokes. My concern would be this will be a logo in the printed in our packaging as well, and the thinner strokes would not show up well in smaller packaging. Thanks.