I like entry 12 but the lacrosse sticks look like the back of guitars and there seems to be a pink haze over the logo. Can you eliminate the box, use more realistic lacrosse sticks and put a girl player in? You can get rid of the ribbon/year too. thanks, Jeff
Still working on how to incorporate the player without making the design too busy. I am also going to make the skyline a bit arced to add a bit more dimension. Thanks! -Brian
Brian - i actually like the entry #32 best (skyline is smaller and more flower showing and the words "summer slam" are a bit bigger). Remember we are talking about rich, white suburbia girl who like pink and flowers. i want the skyline for location purposes. can you just remove the grey background? thanks!
Brian - we like entry #39 best. Can you call me when you get a chance? We're looking for the color to pop a little more. It feels like there is still a haze over it. Thanks, Jeff (484-356-1029)
#39 the word "lacrosse" is misspelled , so I have been trying to get the tagline to line up right with the added letter... you wouldn't think it would make a big difference, but it does.
Unfortunately, it is against site rules for designs to talk to clients directly until they have officially been declared the winner (after is fine). They do this because there are some less honest designers and contest holders that may try to cheat the system and make some sort of "back door deal".
So we can do this two ways.
1. You can declare one of my designs the winner. Then we can get on the phone and I can send you the revisions directly to your email.
2. We can communicate though here and I will upload designs until we get it right.
In the meantime I will upload some color options, so we