Thank you for your entries. Your creative input is most appreciated. As it has been a long holiday weekend here in the US, most of us are just now getting back to the office. Will be reviewing and discussing the entries today to determine next steps. Will let you know what we decide.
My client really likes your design concept. Here are a couple of things they would like to see in a revision. Can you add a red dot and the letters "rec" in the upper right corner...as if to show that you are recording. Can you change the men's clothing to reflect long sleeve button down shirts. Make the camera that the man on the left is holding bigger...similar to #19 or #25. Could you also show the black man on the right to be holding a note/script pad. Make the camera lens surrounding the men to be a bit more 3D like #19 or #25 and make the photograph holders on the corners also a bit more 3D so that they stand out a bit. The man on the left should have dark brown hair, and the black man should have regular glasses instead of sunglasses. In addition to the blue background, could you try some color variations...green, grey or even orange? Perhaps add a bit of a burst effect behind the men like #12. Lastly, they like the use of the A in the name to be a camera stand, but can you try a couple of different fonts for the name to see some variations? Thanks in advance for your efforts. Let me know if you have any questions.
Thanks. I got a couple of minor changes just sent to me. Can you bring the middle line of the "A" to light somewhat from the tripod. Can you please make the black man have darker black skin. We really like the headset, but could you try a different color grey or even black? We would like both avatars to wear like button down shirts, for a more business casual appeal. One of them can have a solid color and the other maybe a stripped shirt.
Think we are almost there. Here are a couple new suggestions from my client. They like the red. Can you add a line on the camera tripod to make the stand look more like an "A". They would like to see the white man on the left with darker brown hair along with a dark brown goatee. Put the headphone on the white man and smooth his hair on top to take away the spike. They also want the white man to be looking into the camera - facing in the same direction as he is currently and looking like he is really filming. Guess you would only see one eye if you do this. They want the black man to have headphones around his neck (not wearing on his head) and have him facing in the direction you have him looking, but they want him holding the script sheet and pointing as though telling the person he is pointing at to start talking....all to give the appearance that they are actually rolling film. They also want the camera lens to be slightly larger, leaving some space about thier heads to create a bit of 3D lighting effect like #15. Finally, the two men should almost be standing back-to-back. Does all of this make sense? Let me know if you need further clarification. Thanks.
hi, yes i can do that, I think this will create a new design for the current revision. Do you have an image to sample activity in which the two characters as you mean before?
My client still likes your design best, so we would like to try and finalize. There are still a couple of revisions they would like to see. I also have a picture of my clients which could help in capturing their physical aspects, i.e. looks, stance, positioning of hands, etc. What is the best way to get these to you? Can I send to your personal email? Mine is hspencer@tmdmainstreet.com. Let me know where to send the picture. The other changes are around the fonts and colors. They want the red in the circle to be brighter...more like the red in the letters of #48. As the red gets darker towards the edge of the camera lens, they don't want it to be quite so dark. Can you have the two men drawn all the way down to the edge of the lens. In #48 it looks like they emerge out of the red circle...they don't like this part. They would also like to see a couple of different letter font styles (like #27 and #15). They want something a bit more bold and 3D looking. #48 is a bit too simple for them. They also like the black letters for the words STAND (with the A being in red - no shadow, but make the line in the A look more like a very subtle sloping "v" like a tri-pod) and the work "BY" in red. They like they way #15 has the words Productions runs right up next to the lower part of the Y that hangs down. For the font that looks similar to #15, they want the word Production to be slightly bigger and start on the right hand slope of the S and go up to the base of the Y. I know it is a little confusing, so let me know if you don't understand what they are looking for.
Hi Thanks for feedback, if I did not misunderstand your feedback, you want:
1. another poses 2. red inside the circle is more like the color red in text # 48 3. two men drawn all the way down to the edge of the lens 4. Couple of different letter styles fonts (more bold and 3d looking)
you can email me at dzaldian@gmail.com .Please provide a detailed brief one by one, so I can understand what you want. Thanks
Great. Just heard back from my client, and here are there last changes. Entry #60 is the best one. I will approve this one, and will wait for you to upload the new version with the following minor changes. Please add an "s" to the word Production - Productions. The white man want his hair more brown...only a little lighter than the shade of the black man. The black man wants his hairline to go straight across. The first one his hairline was too far back, in #60 he has a little too much. He wants it to be straight across...less of the dip in front. Does this make sense? Also, they are worried that the shadow between and behind the men will look funny when they get the high resolution version. Can we simply take away their shadow? How will that look in high resolution?