St. Paul United Girls LacrosseLogo Design Contest

Hi Choffmann,

Its a pleasure to greet you, and I am happy to be participating in your contest.
Here I uploaded my design alternatives for your logo #1 #2 #3 #4
Hope you love it.

please to let me know if you want more revision
It will be a pleasure to work for you.

Thanks
Royan

-Entry #4 is strong
-Entry #3 is good too
-Entry #1, the lacrosse sticks are too hidden in the center. Perhaps remove the white circle (or maybe that is a lacrosse ball) and just have SPA | VIS (or something like that.
-For entry #2, to denote both schools it should have be SPA and VIS designated

and thank you for your entries!

thanks for your feedback

here my updated entries #7 #8

thank you!

Can you also remove the word "girls" so it just reads 'St. Paul United Lacrosse'?

Really like #36....can you revert 'SAP' to 'SPA'?
thx!

Hi Royan...one of the team captains asked if you could remove the word "girls" from entry #8.

Could you put SPA | VIS in this entry somewhere too?

thanks!

hi,

thanks for your nice feedback.
Here my updated entries based from your request
#36 --> #39
#8 --> #40 #41
hope you love it :)

please to let me know if you want more revision

Thanks
Royan

updated entries #53 #54 #55 #56 #57 #58 #59 #60