#24 is pretty cool. Although, I'm leaning towards having the words stacked like in #25. I'm definitely liking the chunkier fonts so feel free to fatten the letters up, too. I'm liking the emblem, but it'd be great to see a couple variations on it-- different font? different colors or maybe just a darker red? Looks cool, though. Thank you!
#29 - Pretty slick. Try scooching the words a little closer together. Possibly bump up the font size a bit? #30 is also looking good if you want to try a couple variations on that. I like the subtlety of the .com in the other designs you've done.
I'd love to see the shading effect from #24 in the newer design (#37), but still keep the thicker outline on the circle. Maybe even try a darker outer circle. I also really like the chunky font in #34. What do you think about moving the graphic to the left hand side with that layout? Would that look too weird if the text was left justified?
#38 is good. Could you please try moving "spunk" a little over to the left so the lower part of the 'p' butts up near the 'W'? (So basically it's not right justified). You could even scoot the .com up a little closer in that little corner under the 'y'. The only other thing I'd change, and I'm not sure if it will work, but maybe beef up the white lettering in the graphic? The top/bottom lines in the S are a bit thinner than the W. Thanks!
#62 Thank you. I actually meant the font in the graphic (the white SW lettering), but I like the new one you used in the text, too. Could you try a different font or two in the graphic part?
#69 tried to outline the logo as in your original file you've included, but in my opinion it only gives the feel of oldish. please let me know what you thing about my latest entries.
This is getting tough. I'm trying to comment on the top 2-3 designs in case you want to see what we're thinking at this point. I consulted a couple people on #73 and this is what we came up with: The outline around the logo/graphic could be a tiny bit thicker. (Is this the outline you thought looked "oldish"? I'd be curious to hear why-- you might change my mind on it.) The relative sizes of the typed out logo and the graphic could be closer. Right now the graphic kind of over powers the text in size. I think if the text got too big, though, the opposite would happen and the graphic would look dinky in comparison. And a couple folks mentioned that the white SW letters looked kind of <quote> "Star Wars-ish." Here, I don't know what to suggest. It could be as simple as just trying a different 'S'. Other than that, there are 1-2 very minor changes. The really strong part everyone agreed on was the reflective/marble effect on the graphic. One person thought it might be interesting to see the same effect but a different color than red, just to see what it'd look like. Thanks very much.