Sports Club 24Logo Design Contest

First I wish to thank you for the invitation and I know it's been a long process in finding that right mark I have 2 design s the first is in 3 parts black and white, silver and black and splash of colour

this design has taken in all consideration such a sign and print. keeping the color and design simple but effect is the key.....the circle is 24 hour clock..the emphasis is on 24. not SC24r sports 24 but "24" this is the key word/number that will be recognized in short order...people will start calling your place 2-fer (two-four) that's canadian slang..they will not be calling sc24 to long to say and doe snot flow well..but it will be call 24's

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second design to follow if I have time the key word is still 24

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any change requests let me know

I like #582 the best, you have some valid points, can you use an open "4" and a different font for the "2" and any way to spice it up a little? I know we have no time, but that's not my fault. What now?

any designer can make change after judging and upload...the only requirement is for you to rank the designer to 1st because only 1st ranked designer can upload changes while in judging mode..

I work on the revisions now

working on the circle one as well

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Would need to fix the font for Sports and Club, all caps is good, but would make ports and lub a little smaller than the s and c. Concept is solid, just need to get a little "edgy"

Put you in first so you can upload.

revision with edger font and a wee bit of grunge brushed metal effect just to give that added touch of not being so shiny and new

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#595 a little too stretched, want it clean an easy to read with in the circle.

#595 would be hot with blue neon outside a brushed allum face did I say hot oh yeah...I have sign fabrication background

tweak on the blue and brush effect

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give me 10

update

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I've placed the sports club inside the outer ring and it's okay not great...if there was additional text yes bu t he 2 word just way off balance

update

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Missed the post about the larger "s and C" so here it is with the 4 reduced in hight

I'm going to tweak on the 2

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this is the one..finally getting the 2 and an d 4 to work out

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Looks much better, just wonder what everyone else will think, I'll let you know after I show it to some of the key people and get you some feedback. Thanks.

adding any more to this design will take away from the design

lets move sports club out side of the 24

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Scott, it does look better, it is just not unique enough, very solid, just not exceptional. Don't know what to do. Thanks, Carter

Carter the design is what it is...I already envision the exterior sign as as alum back lite with blue LEDS, thank you for the considerations

cheers
scott