Speak Your VisionLogo Design Contest

Hey there,

These are really nice. I prefer #87 as it's a little more striking. I love the colours.

I wonder if there's a way to make the other two words a bit bolder, so they stand out more too...

Cheers
Tahnee :-)

revision..thanks for your feedback.

(This comment references Entry #100)

Hey there, I like the blue letters in 101.

I still wonder if there's a way to differentiate all three words...

I like the word "your" to jump out, to inspire people that they can speak THEIR vision.

Cheers
Tahnee

another..thanks

(This comment references Entry #117)

Hey there, I quite like #116. It could potentially be a winning design...

Can you do the word "vision" in the aqua colour, the same as the word "speak".

And can you make both those aqua words a bit thicker and bolder so they stand out more.

And can you put a bit of space between each word, so it's easier to read.

Also, can you make the bottom of the "Y" go left instead of right, so it looks more like the letter "Y" although still looking like a person.

Thanks!
Tahnee :-)

hi here is my revision as what you requested..let me know if you have anything else. thanks

(This comment references Entry #138,#139,#140,#144,#145,#146)

Hey there, #146 and #144 are great.

I prefer the arm on the Y to look like #140, so in all the future designs like #146 can you do the persons arm like #140. THanks.

It might be worth trying #145 all in capital letters.

Also, I really like your watermark, but having the bottom half of the letters lighter can make it kind of dissolve and be hard to read. So I'd prefer if the very bottom of the letter is the darkest bit, rather than the lightest bit. Does that make sense?

Can I see a version of #144, and #146 like this and also a version of #145 all in capitals like this?

OMG I don't know how I'm going to choose between all these beautiful designs, now they're all coming to fruition!

Well done,
Tahnee

another update

(This comment references Entry #160, #161, #162)

Hey there,

(1) #160 and #162 are easier to read now, thanks! But the words "speak" and "vision" are still a little faded at the bottom of the letters.

I think it would be better to remove the gradient on those two words altogether, so that the letters are clear and easy to read without any blurring, even if the design is used at a small size.

(2) I'd also love to see a version of #160 in small caps.

(3) Can I see #101 also without the gradient on the words "speak" and "vision".

It's hard to choose between your three designs - they're all great!

Cheers
Tahnee :-)

new update #176, #177, #178, #179, #180)

Hey, these looks great without the gradient! Much bolder and more dynamic.

(1) I like your new design #183 with the stars in small caps. It's lovely! Good sizes fonts and spacing of the words. But I'd like to see the words "speak" and "vision" a little thicker/bolder.

(2) And can you do the exact same thing again, but with the star design from #180. (You almost have it in #178, but the words "Speak" and "vision" are too small.)

(3) And can you also do #139 in the nice strong colours without the gradient. I still really like that style.

Cheers!
Tahnee :-)

ps I still love your original design #179 SO much. The problem with it is it only emphasises one word, and I really need all three to stand out. But I love how you've done the word "SPEAK' so much, I've been trying to come up with ideas...

I wonder if you could put the word "vision' in capital letters, to differentiate it from the word "your".

Might be worth a try.

And if you could think of a way to make the word "your" stand out too... that would be amazing.

Cheers
Tahnee :-)

new update.. #197, #198, #199, #200, #201, #202, #203, #204, #205, #206)

Hey there, #197 and #198 are great. That's as much as I'd like you to do on that vertical design.

#200 is the best on the horizontal design. You can finish with that one now.

If I decide to go with emphasising the word "your" those are two of my favourite designs. Well done!

** I've been advised by marketing friends to focus my brand more on the word "speak". So the design that I'd like to run with for now is your original one where the word "speak" is the focus. Let's keep it as the largest element with the multi-coloured letters.

I would like to see a design with three lines (eg like #206,) but with the word "Speak" In your original multicoloured design and the words "your" and "vision" In blue.

Could you try one version with "your" in capital letters, and "vision" in small caps... with coloured stars on the "i"s instead of dots.

Can you try a second version with "your" in small caps and "vision" in large caps.

Thanks!
Tahnee :-)

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new update again.. #218,#219,#220,#221)

Hey there,

Hmmm.... I think having the word "your" in such big bold font is distracting from your original striking design of the word "speak". The word your should be the LEAST visible for this new design.

I'd like to see all three lines in small caps.

Make the "your" more subtle like it was eg in #205 or #202. And place the word "vision" on the line below, in a larger stronger font than "your". So most of the focus will be on "speak" but we'll still notice "vision".

Once we get the font sizes right, I'll decide about the stars on the "i"s :-)

(By the way, when we settle on this design, I'll want you to add a bit more of your cheerful aqua back in to it, like eg you had the "S' in #88)

Cheers!
Tahnee :-)

pls check..#255,#256,#312,#313,#314,#315

Hey there, I've been out all day at photo shoot. Just got home to about 50 new designs! Am slowly removing all the early drafts of everyone's designs, so I can see what I have now.

Because I've been out all day, I haven't been able to give you guys any feedback on your newest designs. So I may have to extand the comp for another couple of days. In any case, I'll be in touch once I've had a chance to go through it all. I may have a few last minute revisions for you.

Cheers
Tahnee