We like a lot about your design #44. We love the text and the black bar and we like starburst (although we're not tied to that part). The only think we don't like is the people. Do you have something a little more "icon-based" that can be there to represent and family instead of something so literal?
Also, for the website, can you do versions where the S-F-F in Shore Family Fun are all caps and one where it's all lower case? The lower case F in fun isn't working fo rus.
The newer designs you've sent look great. The rest of the team here won't be around for feedback until tomorrow, but I wanted to let you know that I saw them.
Can you make two sets of tweaks to #99. Then I have to show them to our CEO for final approval. We want to have it be exactly what we want when we show.
Can you: 1) Remove the starburst 2) Change the font to be the one we sent. 3) Make the text all magenta (including the .com) 4) Have the underline go under everything, not just the people (like the other designs)
Also, can you show a version with the changes above with the text all on one line.