ShoreFamilyFun.comLogo Design Contest

Hi -
We like your designs a lot. I think your later entries (#19/#20) are evolving closer to what we're looking for. I like the feel of the lettering on #20, but question whether someone would read it as just "FamilyFun.com. Is there a way to unify that more while keeping that colorful, family friendly vibe?

Also, a question, how would a subtle wave-like shape be under the lettering there? Too much?

What about combining the lettering on #20 with the art on #3. The "bubbles" on 20 feel busy and #3 reads a little like "night" events. But, as I said, we're liking the elements.

thanks girlscoutsjs for u comment
and this comment reference entry#28, #29, #30, #31, #32

i hope u like it

regards
green

Hello -

Definitely a step in the right direction for us. Some variations we'd like to see. All in regard to #34.

1) Our top concern is that people see "ShoreFamilyFun.com" and not "FamilyFun.com." For that reason, the font for the entire phrase probably has to be the same.
2) How does it look if the font for all three words is the same size (except the .com)
3) Can you do a version where the entire website address is the same color (whatever you think complements the art the most?
4) Can you do a horizontal version where the website is all on one line.
5) Can you do a version(s) with the font at this link - https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/53088173/omnesGirlScout%20Font%20(Revised).zip. It's our corporate font, and can't be used for other projects except this one.

updated
#73, #74, #75, #76
#77, #78, #79
#80, #81, #82, #83

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#86, #87, #88, #89
#90, #91, #92, #93
sorry I could not find a font file that you mean (the link can not be accessed)

#83 and #93. Can you tweak the colors a bit to be more bold in tone as opposed to pastel.

For the font, it looks like the link didn't hyperlink the .zip at the end. If you add that, it should work.

updated #107, #108, #109, #110

updated #111, #112, #113, #114