Thanks so much for your feedback, and my apology for not responding sooner. I have uploaded new images with the him more prominent and also with different font in the smaller words. #27, #28, #29, #30, #35. #38 and #39. Made the shield in Silver instead of blue however with blue outlines, adding a little contrast to what you have been seeing.
#52 Show a half Moon instead of a full mountain, also with spacing between words, and change to the word construction. I wold like though, if there's any defining thing you would like to see in your logo. I say your update in the brief and was wondering, if you might have a new concept, of what you might love to see, let me know please. Ill see what i can do.