Nice work! I really like the font. Perhaps you can emphasize the word 'sexy' a bit more through use of colour? Overall - could you do a brighter colour scheme? I'd love to see these logos pop! Thanks!!
Nice work! If at all possible - is it possible to put the word "sexy" in a circle that is in-line with the word "mortgages"? Any maybe on a slight slant? I'm just thinking how to further emphasize (and essentially create a logo for) the word 'sexy'specifically... Just thoughts! Great work! M
Very cool! However, I was thinking more along the lines of the Showtime Logo (http://televisiontechnology.tech.officelive.com/images/Showtime_en_gb.gif) where the word "sexy" would be stylized in the circle, while 'mortgages' and '.com' would remain outside of the circle. This way the circle with 'sexy' in it could still stand on its own as the overall brand. I love the 3D qualities of your designs, and the 'sexy' font is really excellent. Thanks for your fast responses and work on this! cheers, M
Thanks for keep the comment coming. I really do appreciate your quick feedback. Now, I know what revision look like that you want as the link above, I will submit it ASAP. Thank you.
#22 is really getting somewhere cool. I think it might be good to get ride of the graphics within the circle now - as they make it a bit too complicated. Again - I love the font. Perhaps the text can be outlined again as in Entry #19, kept on an angle, and the word 'mortgages' slightly reduced? Great work!
Ya, I would prefer the italic font like in #19. Also - try removing the house graphic from the circle and instead do a solid colour, perhaps? The word "sexy" could span the width of the circle like in #26, and keep the outline.. thanks! "mortgages" could still be written beside the circle, and perhaps a version could be done with it below the circle as well? Thanks for being so open to the revisions and ideas! I really appreciate your work on this! cheers, M
I like the joined 'xy' in #35. My business partner has come to the table with some suggestions - could we try it without the circle? The word 'sexy' might be strong enough on its own with this font and the stylized xy... Also - can you make the "s" the same size as the other letters - so it's not capitalized?
While that can probably stand on its own - perhaps, if you have time and energy, we could try adding an abstract mark?
Thanks again for your work on this! This is a tough brand to work on, and you're doing great work. Cheers, Martinus
Dear Martinus, Thanks for your great feedback. For remove the circle, I can do it in a few minutes. But I need few hours to make an abstract mark to represent your company logo. Please believe me if I can do anything modification that you want. Thanks. Best Regards, Rafa
I really like #48 - very slick. I'm not sure that I like the dark colouring of #49 though... I'll consult my partner on this and send more comments! Thanks again for your energy and work on this! cheers, Martinus
Very sharp! I actually really like it without gradient... Thanks for all of the different examples and options! More thoughts to come.. I need to sleep on these! Thanks again for your hard work! -M
The colours would be light and fun as in #72... Just an idea if you have time! We're still playing with the idea of the Rhino as an abstract symbol of the brand.
Hey - if you still have the time and interest - perhaps you're open to trying some variations on #72 with putting the word 'sexy' into shapes and maybe even some extra ornamentation or augmentation of the 'x'.. We're almost at the end of the contest, so now we're just building up our selection to choose from. Thanks again for your excellent work! M
It looks like we're almost ready to award the prize - and it's now down to two of your designs! Congratulations! I'm curious if you could try revising #72 and #129 by changing the green/gold to red.. Maybe also try a brown and blue version of each? many thanks for all of your hard work and correspondence! cheers, Martinus
Okay - I think this is my LAST revision! Sorry for having so many! Could you do #72 in red and blue? I think we'll make our decision after that. Thanks again! -M
ah! One more revision at the request of my partner:
Let's drop the word "mortgages" and the ".com" for this design Let's use the colours in #204 Let's make the 's','e', and 'y' in 'sexy' the dark blue colour, but let's try the "x" in the red.. This may require the x to be unattached to the y like in #19... but lets make sure the X is slightly augmented like in #204 (the long upper arm on it) Finally - could we try this with and without a gradient on the letters?
Thanks so much - I think we're about done after this!! You're very patient!