Hi Scott,
I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, I've been thinking a lot about your logo. I've done some research on Swan symbolism, and it works really well with the themes that I want to communicate. As far as your adjustments, they both look beautiful to me. I think it'll probably come down to a color theme when deciding upon the right one to use.
I have been thinking about the following colors:
Purple or Indigo/Midnight blue - fantasy, mystery, sophistication, spirituality, expensive, luxurious, feminine
Silver - Vision, Clarity, Strength, Purity, Femine
Green - Creativity, Healing, Renewal, Growth
Orange - Vibrant, Unique, Artistic, Uninhibited
Black - Bold, elegant, mysterious, sophisticated
Why don't you play around with those a bit and see where it takes you. I am more interested in unique versions of the above colors - I don't want to see grass green or fire orange, for instance.
Thanks. Please let me know if any questions come up.
Mindy