River Walk Home BuyersLogo Design Contest

The white sections on the blue umbrella centered

Not quite. Need the white sections a little more centered. Then you're the winner

like this one sir #120 ?

thanks

Your other one is good already. I asked for a small tweak

Final request, could you move the white sections of the blue umbrella just a hair to the left? If you look up close it's slightly going off of the umbrella right now

i'm glad i captured that in this design

thank you...

This is exactly what I was going for.

Wow, this is impressive.

And the font of your other design I commented on please

thanks for the feedback..i will update right away

I'd like to move forward with this text font, I left a design change request on your other entry.

I really like your idea and would like to move forward with it but need some significant tweaks. Could we make the umbrellas much more distinct? Right now they just look like blobs, also maybe try color matching with the umbrellas in the photo I attached.

yes sir..i will update right away

Could you do a version of this with softer lines on the text font and slightly more sharp (harder lines) umbrellas?