Retirement Plans of AmericaLogo Design Contest

Hello,

Any update? please let me know. Thanks

please check uploaded some of variations.

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Thanks for your feedback and rank..
I will revised and upload shortly.

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We like the variations you have done. Can you try another so that "Retirements Plans" is on one line or more dominant. and "of america" is underneath or a little smaller. Also you can make the artwork a little larger so that it takes up the two lines of text. Keep the text blue. Can you explore different fonts based on the comments above. On some of you variations "of" is larger an in italic. please do NOT do that. keep it simple. Thanks

We like this concept. Can you make the sunset a little smaller and not add a another color. Also can you make the typeface a little thinner. this seems too bold. The plans should not be read but maybe "plans of america" can be. Make "of" the same typeface.