also we dont like the M with the movement design... it looks too much like a spider. any other ideas on how the word Pro or the word Motion could have that effect?
also wondering if we can try the same concept on a more sophisticated font or maybe something more hightech. there are some other fonts in the competition that we like and it would be cool to see if the effect works on those.
1) We'd love to see orange with a white and black background 2) Also, if you can look at current rank #44 and #69...we'd like to see the O in "Pro" as both a film reel and play button (two different designs)
1. Ill work on that 2. Due to the fact that another designer has already used the concept of a film reel, i'm unable to enter that concept. I can use the play button.
Would u like me to use this on the present design ranked #34 or the newest entry #135
Thank you very much for the present rank. I have no problem uploading a green version. However, I'm unable to place the play button within the O, as that would be copying the concept already introduced by another designer. As per logo tournament rules, that is not allowed.
I can however upload a variation of the play button for you. Will do so in a few.
I appreciate that you like the design, thank you for that. However as I explained before, logotournament rules dictate, that if another designer has introduced a concept, he had sole right to use that concept. If I place the play button within the O that will be a breach of logotournament rule, as another designer has that concept, which could lead to my remove from your contest. I'd love to be able to honor your request, however I'd be open to another design option if you have one.
1. change color to Pantone Orance 021 2. Change font to Meta Headline Bold or perhaps a slightly lighter version than "bold" but we do want it in the bold range, i know there are slightly smaller versions and slightly fatter version so let me know if you prefer bold or not. 3. we like the level of movement created by the effect. can you show us what that would look like with the effect on the entire word Motion? 4. we would like to see this in a black background version too. when you do the drop shadow effect that creates movement please dont do it in white/grey on the version in black, try it with just the orange accent color since the white drop shadow looks a bit too blurry and makes it hard to read. Keep the word motion white but just try an orange and maybe if you need to light grey drop shadow effect.
Updates uploaded. I do not have Meta Headline in my font collection, however I used a font which is very similar to the one requested, it is Meta Plus. I have done a few variations for the "motion" please let me know your thoughts.
Hey Mr. Smith, not seeing the same "motion" style that's on 34 come through in the new designs... it's like the grey get's lost. We like the motion style on 34 the best but want to see that spread across the entire logo. I like 34 because it seems to move the most with the grey and green back shadow. I think when the grey backshadow is taken away on the white version or it's less pronounced it doesn't appear to move as much, thus my problem with some of the new ones you submitted.
#172- #175, reintroduced the grey, however made it a little deeper so that it wouldn't clash with the white...#172 and #173 work well on either black or white backgrounds. Looking forward to your thoughts
i think #174 #175 most closely resembles the effect of motion that happened in #34. I think you might have missed one part of my direction - spread that effect across the entire word MOTION... does the effect of motion not work unless it's only on part of the word? We think it looks kind of funny being only on part of the word Motion but not all of it so would like to see the grey/orange effect you added back that's on #34 and #174 spread across the entire word MOTION.
Also I like the subtle motion effect created in #34 by having the grey be transparent or maybe just less solid. Can you apply that same color since I like how #175 is more subtle but think we might beable to be a bit more bold (like#34) if the grey is less intense.
i think #174 #175 most closely resembles the effect of motion that happened in #34. I think you might have missed one part of my direction - spread that effect across the entire word MOTION... does the effect of motion not work unless it's only on part of the word? We think it looks kind of funny being only on part of the word Motion but not all of it so would like to see the grey/orange effect you added back that's on #34 and #174 spread across the entire word MOTION.
Also I like the subtle motion effect created in #34 by having the grey be transparent or maybe just less solid. Can you apply that same color since I like how #175 is more subtle but think we might beable to be a bit more bold (like#34) if the grey is less intense.
#178 and #179 are right in theory but i think the movement effect is too extreme - can you give me a few like that with that effect toned down? ie smaller drop text. I like the amount in #34 and the amount in #175 and #30 for example. Also, did you use a transparent effect on the grey? still looks solid to me... can we try something lighter or transparent like the three just mentioned for the white version. Thanks for doing a white AND black version, very helpful.
Please see 4 adjustments. #180 and #181 Adjusted the movement, so its not as extreme as before...more subtle, yet noticeable movement #182 and #183 are slightly lighter on the grey and also the grey words are a little higher.
#178 and #179 are right in theory but i think the movement effect is too extreme - can you give me a few like that with that effect toned down? ie smaller drop text. I like the amount in #34 and the amount in #175 and #30 for example. Also, did you use a transparent effect on the grey? still looks solid to me... can we try something lighter or transparent like the three just mentioned for the white version. Thanks for doing a white AND black version, very helpful.
#178 and #181 are our picks for black and white respectively, can you just shrink the distance between the Pro and the Motion ... it looks too much like it's two words when it's one "ProMotion" same spacing as other words for the o and M.
Congrats! 184 and 185 look great for the black and white versions. Can you be sure to deliver AI, PSD and png's of each so we have a transparent version of each as well. Thanks!