Hello and thank you very much for your entrie! You did a really nice job!
Here are the adjustments we would like you to make on this logo:
1- We would like to keep the character #4 (with grey nose and no moustache)
2- We would like to keep the typo (ProduitsCoreens.fr) you put in #5 (but slightly smaller)
3- We would like you to change the red circle behind the character as it looks like japan flag. To improve this we can suggest you two different things to see how it looks like: a) Just put the Korean flag behind the character (red circle with blue wave in it + black lines) b) Put the Korean flag but without the black lines (red circle + blue wave only without black lines)
Thank you very much. We really appreciate your efforts!
- It is really good like this. Only comment is that the text does'nt seem to be quite well centered with the character (seems to much of the right side). - Also, we whish the have the exact same text as in #13 (We mean that the text "Coreens.fr" seem bigger and with more space on #13 and we prefer this.)
Last comment: -One of our Korean Team member told us that the Korean Flag should be slightly corrected. When you look the "red wave" on the left side of the flag in your logo, you can see that the red "circle" is not totally round. There is a kind of "peak/angle" which should not be there. I hope you understand what we mean. That is a really small detail indeed but we will appreciate if you correct this.
- The face of your character is so cute. We really want to love this cute tiger indeed! - We also like the overal body and colours used for the tiger. - Thank you very much for correcting the Korean flag behind the character.
What we think could be improved:
With the last entries of other designers we are in a hard mind-process to determine what is best for our logo. Our team love your logo as is, but we are now starting to think the current logo lack some "hints" to korean goods/culture. We realized it is important to give clear hints to our customers on what they can find in our store. Because of this we think your logo could be improved in such direction.
- We wish we can see a new version of your logo with more "korean good/culture" related things. Maybe your character could be holding something too...like a flag...or something related to korea. We liked what you tried with the hat but we felt it looks a little bit empty. Like it comes from nowhere (no offense here. It is a little bit hard to express ourselves in english sorry for that). Maybe you could try in such directions for your other designs?
- Also, now we are starting to feel that the colors you used for the text and for the flag are a little bit on the dark side. So it makes an overal look a bit dark. Could you try using more vivid colors?
Again, we really appreciated on your time and efforts on this work.
Hello and thank you very much for this huge improvement!
We really like what you did.
Here are our comments for improvement:
- The color you used are much better now. It is brighter and more vivid so we like it. The only thing is that we feel it somehow slightly lacks of contrast. It slightly looks like colors are pale.
- We wish we could see the same face but without the black lip.
- We really appreciate the efforts you made on the dress but is not a Hanbok. It is a kimono. We understand that it is hard for you to distinguish Hanbok and Kimono, especially since even on Google images it is often wrong.
Here is a link where you can see some examples of Hanbok. Maybe this could help:
We are sorry that you were not selected as our number 1 logo. We love what you did and it was a really really hard process for us to decide between your logo and the one which finally won the contest.
We finally made a vote around our team and friends to make our finale decision...and all of them had big troubles to make a decision.
Finally, the other logo won instead of yours...but it was so close... We feel a bit sad and sorry for the amount of time you took on this to finally become just 2nd.