I really like your work and would love to see a few more variations of this logo if possible. Please separate the Primo from the Pens.. Let's try one on top of the other and then on the same line with some space in between.
Can you also play with the logo itself, since it looks a bit like an exclamation point, but I do like the concept.
Let's also see this in some other colors. Let's try greens, blue and orange. I do like the black. Just want to see these in another color.