Primal PacksLogo Design Contest

I would like to see more color, texture, and creativity; green is great and denotes organic, hunger, and freshness; red is powerful and strong, but I don't like the "heart head"; blue and green together in such close proximity makes me feel neutral whereas I prefer to think of the food as lively and empowering; I do enjoy the idea of a character, however, this one is too abstract, too graceful and slender (lacks power), I don't like the grey, and it isn't a symbol or a character that describes what I would get from my product besides the fact it is lifting a barbell. I would like to see possibly more of a focus on food (jerky, fruits, vegetable, nuts), and definitely an emphasis on the paleolithic period for example a caveman, hunter-gatherer, cave paintings, spears, etc. The weights are an interesting component, however, I am trying to sell a food product in the end.

Hi Sir, Good Day
I am sending some corrected design according your comments,
i hope its will meet the idea in your mind
Yours truly
KChemnad

(This comment references Entry #20)

Entries #20, #21, #22 are all great improvements over #1, although they still use only blue and green which are great colors, but I am finding in other entries that I enjoy red or variations of red; brown is a color I am starting to enjoy very much. I don't like the tree in #20; if there were to be a tree I'd need it to be more rustic, less beautiful, and contain a rougher texture. The "heart fruit" in #20 is not what I am looking for, no hearts please. I like the direction you are heading with the textured font in #20, however, it looks a pit like "paint ball" (the sport) versus "cave paint" (the culture). In #20 I like how you felt to change the orientation of the slogan instead of keeping it in the middle as most would do, however, this might not be exactly what I am looking for. In Entry #22 and #21 I enjoy the fonts. I find the idea of Earth intriguing in Entry #22, however, I would like it to be rougher, tougher, and maybe a different color or a combination of colors. Entry #21 finally uses fruit (food!) which I am looking for in my product logo.

Please see my general contest discussion too for additional comments...

Hi sir, Good day
I am sending one corrected version here.
i hope, tomorrow i can send more creative design, clean n classy.
regards
KChemnad

(This comment references Entry #24)

Entry #24 is interesting. I really like the "primal landscape". I like the new font, its style, and color, however, I still like the fact you used two different colors - one with "Primal" and another with "Pack" could you play with some ideas there? I think if the tree was "drawn" in the same style as the words and the landscape it would have a better effect, right now the tree looks like "water color" where the rest looks like "oil paint" or "chalk". There is also a lot of red, but I like the slogan font.

I like the globe in #22 maybe play with colors in that or turn it into a cave painting (nobody has done a cave painting yet!) The leaves and stem in #22 is a little odd though. I like the leaf design in #21 maybe some additional concepts with that, but more fruit. You do beautiful work.

I would like to see some imagery associated with the paleolithic period in an idea or two - spears, wooden mallet, cave painting, animal skins, caveman, etc.

Hi sir
According your comment here, i studied about the cave painting n paleolithic period,
then i draw small paintings and add lots of effects to make to as old, i hope its will reach to your idea.
any changes, please you send comments.
yours truly
KChemnad

(This comment references Entry #40)

This is a stunning development! Entry #40 is fantastic, there is a lot of detail. I will leave more comments soon, once I have time to think about your newest design, however, the tree is a contrasting issue. It needs to be in the same style as your cave paintings, rugged and old.

I thought about the tree in #40 and thought it should be in the center and exemplify the detail shown below. If not I suggest creating a animal skin bag with fruits, nuts, and vegetables flowing out to put in the middle.

I still like #40 much better than #41; I don't like the tree and I do not like the bag. It looks too much like a grocery bag, less like a paleolithic food pouch which what I was hoping for. I would like the tree replaced with a hunter throwing a spear as in #27. I would still like to see food incorporated somewhere though. Please keep playing.

Hi sir, yesterday i did that fruit brown bag, but i didnt like that actually,
i was thinking to change that today, before you send message.
so i change as before then the tree add like old tree,
i hope you will like this.
anything please send message sir.
regards
KChemnad

(This comment references Entry #43)

The tree is a lot better, way better, thank you for your quick changes KChemnad. #40 has darker and easier to see cave paintings, they became lighter in #43 and are now hard to see. I wonder if you could make the fruit older looking to match the rest of the logo, but someway keep color. I would still like to see a hunter and spear in there somewhere as well.

Why were your submissions removed by "Staff/Moderator"?

Hi sir.
I refer the cave painting images, that they removed.
that same website i refer for the painting, i told you before that "i studied about the cave painting n paleolithic period, then i draw small paintings and add lots of effects to make to as old" even i draw then also they not allowed from that images. i will create new something tommorrow. i dont want lose this competition.
Yours truly.
KChemnad

Understood, I was sad to loose them. Look forward to similar design.

Hi sir, Good day
I was hope less to add a new entry here, because i was travelling from India to Dubai.
thats why really late entry, Sorry.

I studied all entry here, then according your last comment include i create some more idea.
I hope its will reach the idea in your mind sir.
yours truly
KChemnad

(This comment references Entry #67)

Hi sir,
Any comments, i will make changes according that.
yours truly
KChemnad

(This comment references Entry #68)

There is no harmony in your design I am afraid; the fruit and caveman are too cartoonish for me. The cave drawings were a great addition and were better than anything I had seen, however, in total your design as is will not be something I am interested in. Thank you for your submissions and your great attitude. Look forward to any more ideas should you care to submit more.