Can we remove the check marks and try some different background colours? Needs a hook, I really like the #1 ranked as it has a sense of motion in it. See if you can introduce something like that?
Thank you for your feedback. You`re asking me to introduce concepts of roads/paths/movement/etc. This has been already been done (in the 1st and 2nd ranked designs) and, with all due respect, I won`t do the same. I tried to present you something different but it seems you`re stuck with your idea. You will end up having in the first 5-10 places similar designs. If you`re asking me, killing the diversity is counter-productive. The big advantage of using a crowd design site is that the client receives a lot of different ideas to choose from (and not a variation of the same concept). Just my 2 cents.
You misread my comment. It was not to do the same thing. I liked that the others had a sense of movement in them. Not to put a road in yours. I was looking for you to try something different. However you wanted to interpret it. I am trying to increase you chance at winning as right now your design has merit but it lacks visual interest. Thanks for your efforts.